Thriller Project.02

                             Narrative

We came up with various ideas for  an opening scene. We tried to think of 3 main things while writing:
 Firstly that something dramatic needs to happen which draws the viewer; for example in the movie Scream 4 in the opening scene it features a movie inside another movie which is constantly making you think about what may happen next.
Secondly we needed to give the viewer some insight into what may happen in the movie without giving away too much. For example, in the opening scene opening scene of the hit comedy American Pie the reunion it is obvious about what will happen in the movie due to its predictability.
 Thirdly, and lastly, we need to create suspicion, so we need to build up the plot without filling the movie with double entendres/ cliffhangers. For example the biggest fault with the movie 'James Bond 007' is its use of double entendre which made it confusing for the viewer.

 Double entendres  meaning a word or phrase open to two interpretations, one of which is usually risqué or indecent.

The clip of James Bond 007- Double Entendres

The first idea we had was to have a mad man who is obsessed with luring young girls to their grave  by feeding on their blood  in the hope of staying young. He does this by going to clubs , and finding these underaged girls whose parents are most likely unaware of  them being their. Then by being assisted by bar staff he drugs them using day rape drugs  and drains their blood.
                                
                  ' The CANNIBAL'

The second idea we had was to have a man who stalks people who he believes are "unsure", and "unworthy" to be alive, with the intention of killing them. He determines this by class system, hierarchy, gender, sexual orientation and race. It starts off with a homeless girl who he tries to lure in with the promise of a warm bed and food.

                                                 ' EXTERMINATION' 

the third idea we had which we ended up using was of Physiologically damaged 19 Year old boy falls obsessively in love with a gorgeous blonde… and three friends. He  takes it upon himself to seduce them in a bid to make them fall in love with him without them knowing about one-another.  He is so physiologically damaged that he has trust issues which leads to him stalking and controlling their lives. But one day one of the girls find out how ill he really is  and in the bid to cover up his secret he commits murder. 

                                                   'MY LOVE FOR YOU'

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